To wait……and wait…….and wait….. but they fell asleep. The next morning they were disappointed ,the jar was full but they didn’t see what happened. The next night they decided to stay up again so they waited………and waited………and waited this time they didn’t fall asleep BUT Mom told them to go to sleep because it was school the next day, they were furious but luckily it was friday so they could stay up late this night so they did. And again they waited…and waited finnaly they saw the magic happen the jar was shining brightly they could not even open their eyes . When it stoped shining they opened thier eyes IT WAS FULL!
The twins are going to investgat by staing up all night thay hid in the clouset and found the coocy elvs puting in all the coocys the yummy koockes thay fell aslep turns out it was the dad that put the coocys in the tin thay wock up and saw dad.and they
sead we love you dad
to throw it away for ever the next morning it was in the bedroom and everone was very scared that same night they woke
up on 3am and then the tin wisperd hello ………
the twin’s diden’t say nothing .
So one night,they decided to install cameras directly where the biscuits were.And in the morning they saw something and they could not believe their eyes.They checked the camera footage and they saw that Shrek and Hulk has been steeling the cookies and they were replacing them with the newer ones that arent even in the shops yet
So since they found out that Shrek and Hulk has been replacing old cookies with new ones,they stayed up all night and waited for them.They found out that Hulk comes first and tells Shrek when to come. But they also found out Venom whispers through the chimney “Boys ima bowt to drop the cookies be ready” and when they stole the cookies and replaced them,they realised that there was a camera in the corner of the room
So they rushed out and never came back again.But when they looked out the window,they saw the boys dancing because they stole their favourite cookies from the rich family again!
They decided to put up spy camrera to see
who is or what is it .
So the little twins put them up when there mum was not looking
and so they …..wait……..wait……………..and…………………wait.
THE TWINS fell asleep and they woke up and went to the kitchen
and the cameras were gone so they had no
proof of who it is ,so they got another camera
and hid it very well so who ever it is they wont find it.
THE next day the twins woke up it was emty
they thought it was too early and it would be
full by now but it shined with a bright light
and the light stopped the bowl was FULL OF COOKIES! BY LAURA
I think that Santa puts biscuits in the tin when the potter twins are asleep and it’s not actually haunted and he gets elves to help him. The potter twins stay all night spying to see if the biscuit tin is haunted and after a while nothing happened so they went down stairs to see if anything happened but in the corner of their eye they saw Santa escaping and they caught him and tied him in a rope.
so they decided to keep an eye on the haunted cookie jar all night until they finally knew what was going on. After a while, they saw two scary gnomes eating the cookies and then magically filling them up with cookies that were limited edition and would never come back to the local food shop.
to not sleep for the night or buy a spy camera. The family chose not to sleep for the night. Each family member even the twins were scattered all over the house. One member, one room. At midnight, the twin and Anni were all falling asleep but, mum was still awake (lucky for her) until, at 2:00 am she fell asleep. The next morning, the whole family woke up with disappointed.
My story continues like this:
decided that they have to investigate because it could be dangerous and they wanted to deal with it.They decided to stay up all night to spy.For the whole night they tried thier best to not fall asleep.Suddenly a bright light shone and then they saw a incredible god that helped sad children,they quickly ran to it but diapeared…
to stay up all night to investigate who put the biscuits in the haunted tin maybe its Santa or the avengers but they fell a sleep
in the middle of the night but then someone sneaked up from the bed and went next to the cookie jar and fill it up but they were asleep so they could not see the monster but the next day they were furious but they saw a peice of paper it was the monster name wich was owen wilson. but they did not give up they pretend to sleep and they saw the monster it was……………
A GREEN DISGUSTING LOOKING JELLY MONSTER! THAT WAS OWEN WILSON but the worst thing was… the cookies were from owen wilson mouth! AND THEY ATE IT!
The twins decided to stay up and find out who was filling up the biscuit tin.They hid in the living room closet.The twins heard quiet foot steps going into the kitchen where the biscuit tin was.They quietly went in the kitchen not seeing who or what they heard.They whispered to each other while putting a blanket over them so what ever it was thought it was just a blanket on the floor.They peeked out of the blanket.Through the blanket they saw the person filling the biscuit tin.The twins were suprised when they saw who was re-filling the tin it was one of the elf’s Santa sent to them.They were so happy that they found out who was filling the tin they tried to talk to the elf but it was gone.
I think he will eat the cookies and then they will hide somewhere? it might off been the dad. the person will grab a weapon and then they will hide somewhere in the closet they will go sneakily in the attic upstairs and then they will lock them self in with chains the attic looked very scary a teddy bear with an eye missing they put him on the table in the atic suddenly the tin was right in front off them….. they smashed it on the floor and then they heard a gun shot BANG- BANG- there was a child saying HELP M- BANG but there was a paper saying that the child was actually dreaming but they still heard the gun shots And Then they realised the tin was haunted…………….
was a dog eat the Biscuit a cat eat the twit eat a drame about gosgd hop they must be hop they . what them ok mum to be ringt becau she dont,s get restout bit do not wowey get be goshg.
so they spite on the biscets but they felt eslep then mum sore them and waked them up then they run to see but there was nathing they were dis epoting.
…to stay up in the night to see who was kindly giving them these biscuits. So as soon as Nanny Potter and mum fell asleep the twins carefully tiptoed downstairs. They sat on the kitchen stools and waited for someone to come .While they were waiting they were thinking about who is doing it , they had some pretty radical ideas . ” Maybe, there was a gravy monster who hated biscuits and they had a flood of biscuits and wanted to get rid of them and they saw the empty biscuit tin?” thought the first .
” Maybe , they were just appearing magically?” thought the second one . Eventually they fell asleep. Suddenly there was a big bang coming from the window . The twins woke up startled, they rushed to the window and looked outside . They saw a flashing light . Scared, they hid under the kitchen table . Just then they saw a little snowman putting the biscuits in the tin .
” SO IT ISN’T HAUNTED!” they said together. The snowman saw them and put his finger on his lips . The next day they said nothing and they never said a word.
THE END
To pretended to go to sleep but really they hid under there covers waiting to see if anyone or anything was going to come and fill the celebrations box. They each sent secret signs to each other then suddenly they both heard a creaking sound coming toward there bedroom. Silently they woke up and saw there mother and relised they fell asleep , so the next night they done the same thing but made sure they didn’t fall asleep tonight. This time they didn’t fall asleep they saw the biscuit elf then quickly they tuck under there covers in shock of what they just saw. They both worked up the corrage to get out of bed. And then saw the biscuit elf and tried to talk to it but they were to late the biscuit elf had gone.The next morning the woke up with sad faces thinking will they ever see the biscuit elf again.
so they decided to …. stay until it was night . when it was night they crept down stairs and took the celabrations tin and slowy tip toed back to there room . they put on one of there beds and waited until midnight , finally it was time . it flashed so bright that they had to wear sun glasses a elf apperd and filled it up.
ther mum and nanny was making food but one nignt the twins were in the kichin eating the biscuit and then they hrd a foot step coming dow the sters and the twins went in the cubrd and it was ther nanny coming dow the sters geting sume milk for her and mum nanny went up sters and the twins srr a elf on the shelf and went and ran the end by layla
Later that night the twins decided to watch the tin when everyone was fast asleep. The twins waited and waited and waited but suddenly they fell asleep. The twins did it again the next night but then when they waited and waited the twins made a noise and their mother told them to get up and go to sleep. Their mother came in because she noticed that the twins didn’t go to sleep but then when she came in the magic happened chocolate elves appeared and gave them more chocolate and the elves ate the chocolates with them.
then the girls called a friend a big one the biggest of there friends KING KONG he looked and leaped at the tower were the girls live KONG ran they were still green so they called KONG on his biggest phone samson 9999999999
KONG said hello the girls said help us get rid of the snacks he said ok and ate the tin then robo KONG jumped and took the tin before he ate them then scan the tin he said no it is made out of cromeotrite and it slowly terns things cocromeotrite
he tearnd to crome and evaperated then KONG said come and got a jet pack then they went to GODZILER and he also had a jet pack
he said this is the end for me as he fell into the crome and said my planit is safe and he got coverd they went to the planit and found a cure and the twins tearnd into wich twins
and there magic tearnd it into a nuke from a cure to a nuke and nuked the world it tearnd back to normal and jar tearnd to normal
To take the biscuit tin to their room in the night.That night they didn’t sleep they waited and waited all night long until…. They heard a noise coming from the kitchen,BANG,BANG,BANG the twins gulped with fear
“Oh,no”cried the twins
“What if its a murderer?”
“Stop being silly!of course its not a murderer!”said Maudie
“They are probably looking for the tin”said one of the twins
“Ssshhhhh”said the mum
There was another bang and a sound of a
metal bowl falling.
“Where is it?”cried two sweet voices
“OH MY GOSH,did you guys hear that?”asked one of the twins
“Hear what said?”said Maudie
“Nevermind”said the twin sadly
A sweet smell came from the kitchen so they went to check it out!
They saw a boy elf and a girl fairy
“What are you guys doing here!?”Shouted Maudie
“Eeeek”Screamed the girl fairy
The girl fairy hid behind the elf and peeked over his petite shoulder
The children was awake all night to know how are the biscuit tin full then they saw santa coming they were so happy they went to santa and said thank you for the biscuit then santa asked for milk and the children said ok they gave the milk to santa and then santa gave presents to the children and the presents where biscuit 100 squishmelows and a cake and the children where shoked and said to santa i love you and you will always be on the good list and he went away and the children where sad that santo went away but still the children where very happy about the presents
To buy a dog and a ring camera and stay up in their mums bedroom for extra proof. suddenly they had all been sleeping and were in a really deep sleep. But at early times in the morning at like 3:00 AM the dog started barking and the camera started bringing up notifications on her phone so many times. One of the twins who wasn’t in a deep sleep got up and went to see why the dog was barking. Anni was also in a deep sleep and couldn’t hear the dog. The other twin got up and also went to look but when the twin opened the door she screamed and so did the other twin…………IT WAS THE ELF ON THE SHELF .
they ran until the elf was following them and they tried screaming for help but it didn’t work the mom woke up and smiled and said “MY PRANK WORKED!”the twins heard her the elf stopped it all happend so fast the twins went to there mom hugging eachother . the mom said it was all a prank and said they could keep the dog and they said “YAYY”
THE END
To sit all night to see who puts biscuits in the cookie container they wanted all night but finally they fallen asleep but the next day when they woke up in the morning and the container was full again but they didn’t give up so the next day they made a trick they put gliter all over the floor and took two cups and a string to stick it on the floor so the secret willcome out. in the middle of the night a big loud noise camed outn of the kitche that was a elf and evry one lived happy and forever
yay
someone might be sneaking or it must be the elves or dad.
maybe someone sneaking
i think is a true
To wait……and wait…….and wait….. but they fell asleep. The next morning they were disappointed ,the jar was full but they didn’t see what happened. The next night they decided to stay up again so they waited………and waited………and waited this time they didn’t fall asleep BUT Mom told them to go to sleep because it was school the next day, they were furious but luckily it was friday so they could stay up late this night so they did. And again they waited…and waited finnaly they saw the magic happen the jar was shining brightly they could not even open their eyes . When it stoped shining they opened thier eyes IT WAS FULL!
The twins are going to investgat by staing up all night thay hid in the clouset and found the coocy elvs puting in all the coocys the yummy koockes thay fell aslep turns out it was the dad that put the coocys in the tin thay wock up and saw dad.and they
sead we love you dad
Or it might be dad who did it
but it doesn’t meantion dad Danielle
to throw it away for ever the next morning it was in the bedroom and everone was very scared that same night they woke
up on 3am and then the tin wisperd hello ………
the twin’s diden’t say nothing .
to go down stairs and see how the cookies appear in the basket and dad put them in.
So one night,they decided to install cameras directly where the biscuits were.And in the morning they saw something and they could not believe their eyes.They checked the camera footage and they saw that Shrek and Hulk has been steeling the cookies and they were replacing them with the newer ones that arent even in the shops yet
So since they found out that Shrek and Hulk has been replacing old cookies with new ones,they stayed up all night and waited for them.They found out that Hulk comes first and tells Shrek when to come. But they also found out Venom whispers through the chimney “Boys ima bowt to drop the cookies be ready” and when they stole the cookies and replaced them,they realised that there was a camera in the corner of the room
So they rushed out and never came back again.But when they looked out the window,they saw the boys dancing because they stole their favourite cookies from the rich family again!
THE END
I like this because it’s creative funny weird and very unique.
They decided to put up spy camrera to see
who is or what is it .
So the little twins put them up when there mum was not looking
and so they …..wait……..wait……………..and…………………wait.
THE TWINS fell asleep and they woke up and went to the kitchen
and the cameras were gone so they had no
proof of who it is ,so they got another camera
and hid it very well so who ever it is they wont find it.
THE next day the twins woke up it was emty
they thought it was too early and it would be
full by now but it shined with a bright light
and the light stopped the bowl was FULL OF COOKIES! BY LAURA
I think that Santa puts biscuits in the tin when the potter twins are asleep and it’s not actually haunted and he gets elves to help him. The potter twins stay all night spying to see if the biscuit tin is haunted and after a while nothing happened so they went down stairs to see if anything happened but in the corner of their eye they saw Santa escaping and they caught him and tied him in a rope.
so they decided to keep an eye on the haunted cookie jar all night until they finally knew what was going on. After a while, they saw two scary gnomes eating the cookies and then magically filling them up with cookies that were limited edition and would never come back to the local food shop.
to not sleep for the night or buy a spy camera. The family chose not to sleep for the night. Each family member even the twins were scattered all over the house. One member, one room. At midnight, the twin and Anni were all falling asleep but, mum was still awake (lucky for her) until, at 2:00 am she fell asleep. The next morning, the whole family woke up with disappointed.
My story continues like this:
decided that they have to investigate because it could be dangerous and they wanted to deal with it.They decided to stay up all night to spy.For the whole night they tried thier best to not fall asleep.Suddenly a bright light shone and then they saw a incredible god that helped sad children,they quickly ran to it but diapeared…
to stay up all night to investigate who put the biscuits in the haunted tin maybe its Santa or the avengers but they fell a sleep
in the middle of the night but then someone sneaked up from the bed and went next to the cookie jar and fill it up but they were asleep so they could not see the monster but the next day they were furious but they saw a peice of paper it was the monster name wich was owen wilson. but they did not give up they pretend to sleep and they saw the monster it was……………
A GREEN DISGUSTING LOOKING JELLY MONSTER! THAT WAS OWEN WILSON but the worst thing was… the cookies were from owen wilson mouth! AND THEY ATE IT!
The twins decided to stay up and find out who was filling up the biscuit tin.They hid in the living room closet.The twins heard quiet foot steps going into the kitchen where the biscuit tin was.They quietly went in the kitchen not seeing who or what they heard.They whispered to each other while putting a blanket over them so what ever it was thought it was just a blanket on the floor.They peeked out of the blanket.Through the blanket they saw the person filling the biscuit tin.The twins were suprised when they saw who was re-filling the tin it was one of the elf’s Santa sent to them.They were so happy that they found out who was filling the tin they tried to talk to the elf but it was gone.
I think he will eat the cookies and then they will hide somewhere? it might off been the dad. the person will grab a weapon and then they will hide somewhere in the closet they will go sneakily in the attic upstairs and then they will lock them self in with chains the attic looked very scary a teddy bear with an eye missing they put him on the table in the atic suddenly the tin was right in front off them….. they smashed it on the floor and then they heard a gun shot BANG- BANG- there was a child saying HELP M- BANG but there was a paper saying that the child was actually dreaming but they still heard the gun shots And Then they realised the tin was haunted…………….
was a dog eat the Biscuit a cat eat the twit eat a drame about gosgd hop they must be hop they . what them ok mum to be ringt becau she dont,s get restout bit do not wowey get be goshg.
so they spite on the biscets but they felt eslep then mum sore them and waked them up then they run to see but there was nathing they were dis epoting.
…to stay up in the night to see who was kindly giving them these biscuits. So as soon as Nanny Potter and mum fell asleep the twins carefully tiptoed downstairs. They sat on the kitchen stools and waited for someone to come .While they were waiting they were thinking about who is doing it , they had some pretty radical ideas . ” Maybe, there was a gravy monster who hated biscuits and they had a flood of biscuits and wanted to get rid of them and they saw the empty biscuit tin?” thought the first .
” Maybe , they were just appearing magically?” thought the second one . Eventually they fell asleep. Suddenly there was a big bang coming from the window . The twins woke up startled, they rushed to the window and looked outside . They saw a flashing light . Scared, they hid under the kitchen table . Just then they saw a little snowman putting the biscuits in the tin .
” SO IT ISN’T HAUNTED!” they said together. The snowman saw them and put his finger on his lips . The next day they said nothing and they never said a word.
THE END
To pretended to go to sleep but really they hid under there covers waiting to see if anyone or anything was going to come and fill the celebrations box. They each sent secret signs to each other then suddenly they both heard a creaking sound coming toward there bedroom. Silently they woke up and saw there mother and relised they fell asleep , so the next night they done the same thing but made sure they didn’t fall asleep tonight. This time they didn’t fall asleep they saw the biscuit elf then quickly they tuck under there covers in shock of what they just saw. They both worked up the corrage to get out of bed. And then saw the biscuit elf and tried to talk to it but they were to late the biscuit elf had gone.The next morning the woke up with sad faces thinking will they ever see the biscuit elf again.
so they decided to …. stay until it was night . when it was night they crept down stairs and took the celabrations tin and slowy tip toed back to there room . they put on one of there beds and waited until midnight , finally it was time . it flashed so bright that they had to wear sun glasses a elf apperd and filled it up.
ther mum and nanny was making food but one nignt the twins were in the kichin eating the biscuit and then they hrd a foot step coming dow the sters and the twins went in the cubrd and it was ther nanny coming dow the sters geting sume milk for her and mum nanny went up sters and the twins srr a elf on the shelf and went and ran the end by layla
Later that night the twins decided to watch the tin when everyone was fast asleep. The twins waited and waited and waited but suddenly they fell asleep. The twins did it again the next night but then when they waited and waited the twins made a noise and their mother told them to get up and go to sleep. Their mother came in because she noticed that the twins didn’t go to sleep but then when she came in the magic happened chocolate elves appeared and gave them more chocolate and the elves ate the chocolates with them.
The End.
then the girls called a friend a big one the biggest of there friends KING KONG he looked and leaped at the tower were the girls live KONG ran they were still green so they called KONG on his biggest phone samson 9999999999
KONG said hello the girls said help us get rid of the snacks he said ok and ate the tin then robo KONG jumped and took the tin before he ate them then scan the tin he said no it is made out of cromeotrite and it slowly terns things cocromeotrite
he tearnd to crome and evaperated then KONG said come and got a jet pack then they went to GODZILER and he also had a jet pack
he said this is the end for me as he fell into the crome and said my planit is safe and he got coverd they went to the planit and found a cure and the twins tearnd into wich twins
and there magic tearnd it into a nuke from a cure to a nuke and nuked the world it tearnd back to normal and jar tearnd to normal
To take the biscuit tin to their room in the night.That night they didn’t sleep they waited and waited all night long until…. They heard a noise coming from the kitchen,BANG,BANG,BANG the twins gulped with fear
“Oh,no”cried the twins
“What if its a murderer?”
“Stop being silly!of course its not a murderer!”said Maudie
“They are probably looking for the tin”said one of the twins
“Ssshhhhh”said the mum
There was another bang and a sound of a
metal bowl falling.
“Where is it?”cried two sweet voices
“OH MY GOSH,did you guys hear that?”asked one of the twins
“Hear what said?”said Maudie
“Nevermind”said the twin sadly
A sweet smell came from the kitchen so they went to check it out!
They saw a boy elf and a girl fairy
“What are you guys doing here!?”Shouted Maudie
“Eeeek”Screamed the girl fairy
The girl fairy hid behind the elf and peeked over his petite shoulder
The children was awake all night to know how are the biscuit tin full then they saw santa coming they were so happy they went to santa and said thank you for the biscuit then santa asked for milk and the children said ok they gave the milk to santa and then santa gave presents to the children and the presents where biscuit 100 squishmelows and a cake and the children where shoked and said to santa i love you and you will always be on the good list and he went away and the children where sad that santo went away but still the children where very happy about the presents
To buy a dog and a ring camera and stay up in their mums bedroom for extra proof. suddenly they had all been sleeping and were in a really deep sleep. But at early times in the morning at like 3:00 AM the dog started barking and the camera started bringing up notifications on her phone so many times. One of the twins who wasn’t in a deep sleep got up and went to see why the dog was barking. Anni was also in a deep sleep and couldn’t hear the dog. The other twin got up and also went to look but when the twin opened the door she screamed and so did the other twin…………IT WAS THE ELF ON THE SHELF .
they ran until the elf was following them and they tried screaming for help but it didn’t work the mom woke up and smiled and said “MY PRANK WORKED!”the twins heard her the elf stopped it all happend so fast the twins went to there mom hugging eachother . the mom said it was all a prank and said they could keep the dog and they said “YAYY”
THE END
To sit all night to see who puts biscuits in the cookie container they wanted all night but finally they fallen asleep but the next day when they woke up in the morning and the container was full again but they didn’t give up so the next day they made a trick they put gliter all over the floor and took two cups and a string to stick it on the floor so the secret willcome out. in the middle of the night a big loud noise camed outn of the kitche that was a elf and evry one lived happy and forever